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Golden Sun:  Lina,Jenna by acetea-san Golden Sun:  Lina,Jenna by acetea-san
Un nouveau Fanart d'un de mes RPG préféré! Fait sur Open Canvas.
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:iconacetea-san:
acetea-san Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you \o
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clampfan101 Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Girls almost never focus on fire magic. I like that about Jenna. :D
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Blackraider78 Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not as old as Mia's one but still not what I'd call up to date with your skills. Especially the fire you would have probably done a lot better at.

Unfortunately I have a direct complaint her, which would be that her jacket looks like it's molten around her breast, specially fitted to be like a second skin, contrary to the original design which is far more realistic. puu.sh/3RnJJ.png

I also don't think the Djinn worked out all that well, it seems to be hovering off to the side despite your attempts to make it look like it has motion. More importantly it is just so CLOSE, or even in front of Jenna. It doesn't work for me.

I love her facial expression. She looks like she's in a fight she's going to enjoy. Probably nearing the end of Lost Chapters where she is confident in her abilities. However, I can't help but feel that her face looks BOYISH. Maybe it's the eyebrows? I'm not good enough to quite recognize why it looks boyish but it's kind of off-putting what with how girly she is.

P.s. great wavey hair, forgot to mention that!
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acetea-san Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! maybe i will do a jenna 2.0 close to the original design of the character :).
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Blackraider78 Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'll never say no to more Golden Sun fanart, and if I can pressure you into making more then I have no problems doing that!
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Spirit-Seer-of-Water Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really great. I love her confidence. Even if the Mars djinni and Summon were not behind her, you could still feel her fiery spirit. Fantastic work. :)
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acetea-san Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much :)!!
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Spirit-Seer-of-Water Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! :)
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:iconrandompedestrian:
I think my favourite part of this painting is her face. It's so wildly expressive that it gives motion to everything else. I'd tweak the breastplate a little though. Boobs don't tend to get super defined through leather armour padding, and the shading there looks a little forced. Both the djinn and the fume dragon look awesome, and the colour choices are really cool.
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