Not as old as Mia's one but still not what I'd call up to date with your skills. Especially the fire you would have probably done a lot better at.
Unfortunately I have a direct complaint her, which would be that her jacket looks like it's molten around her breast, specially fitted to be like a second skin, contrary to the original design which is far more realistic. puu.sh/3RnJJ.png
I also don't think the Djinn worked out all that well, it seems to be hovering off to the side despite your attempts to make it look like it has motion. More importantly it is just so CLOSE, or even in front of Jenna. It doesn't work for me.
I love her facial expression. She looks like she's in a fight she's going to enjoy. Probably nearing the end of Lost Chapters where she is confident in her abilities. However, I can't help but feel that her face looks BOYISH. Maybe it's the eyebrows? I'm not good enough to quite recognize why it looks boyish but it's kind of off-putting what with how girly she is.